Thursday, May 18, 2006

Looking for someone… ;;)

Introduction – With most of the school and college friends getting involved in some or other kind of a relationship, am wondering what next? They have stopped spending much time with me…yeah poor me :(. That gives me more time to sit alone and listen to my thoughts. So all the people struck by the cupid (even those who are in perfect senses)…this is an attempt to write something partly romantic for the first time.
So “writer is learning” [‘L’ board], please read at your own risk :P
Still hope you have a safe journey!

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The surroundings have changed…everything seems pink!
I listen someone dear…say this to me!
As I turn around towards the chirpy soul’s side
I just can’t help noticing smile on the lips…and twinkle in the eyes!

Nothing has happened…nothing has changed
What’s the matter with you…I ask in amaze?
I’ve found someone whose caring, understanding, mature,
humorous, cool and sweet
Oh how much I miss that dear…oh when will we meet!

There’s no point listening to someone who’s in a trance
Without hearing to any music…whose feet just dance!
But then I think…I wonder
Is there something I miss…I should really ponder!

Ok…so what is that I am looking for in the so-called “soul mate”?
Maybe listing it down can make the task a bit easier…
and give me a more decisive fate!

Perfection is boring…coz it never lets one improve!
Too much care is bugging, as it never lets one grow!
But then aren’t these the typical qualities that one looks for?
At least I have heard this from people who have traveled...
the ‘dream world’ quite afore!

Is it necessary to have something in mind?
Cant it be just like…two people meet and everything’s just fine!
But maybe there is phase, as they say, one has to go through
Oh God please bless me and save me all the work I need to do :P

Maybe I am searching for something…may be I am not
Its kind of strange why I haven’t given it that much thought!
But as of now to tell you the fact…no matter how naive it be…
I am looking for someone…with whom I can be me :)

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Above poem's ecard @

http://www.17pixels.com/ecards/someone.html

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15 Comments:

At Thursday, May 18, 2006, Blogger anonymouse said...

Ahhhh...

Hurt by the arrow that struck somebody else

hehehe :)

But then such is life :P

Seek and thou shalt find.

But seek not out of such reasons as but the end, for that is folly.

The sweetest part of the search is the wait and the anticipation.

Relations built on strength endure, those that are born out of weakness are castles in air, that may shatter like glass.

And so is the wisdom of the great Shrivallabh baba.

 
At Thursday, May 18, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

The first two para's remind me of someone ;) . I wonder does it ? :-P

 
At Thursday, May 18, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I am through this journey safely (reading the blog). Hope the writer has the actual journey described here soon. Yet another blog written amazingly and I enjoyed reading it :). Just a word of advice, have no prejudices in your mind, I am sure u'll enjoy the journey thoroughly. It’s worth all the pain of waiting. :P

 
At Friday, May 19, 2006, Blogger prashant said...

;)

 
At Friday, May 19, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

SSSSUUUPPPERB!!!!FFFFAANTASTIC!!!!

Keep the thoughts flowing......

 
At Friday, May 19, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Good one :-)

 
At Friday, May 19, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey...the journey was safe Huh!! :) .....very nice blog yaar....keep goin ...

 
At Friday, May 19, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

True & Honest in a funny sort of way..
But alas amrita.. Dodge the cupid till you decide to be HIT ;)

 
At Tuesday, May 23, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey amrita,

That was a good blog...Thanks for deciding to cut down on film reviews... I always knew you could write qualiy stuff...Great job. Keep it up... And dont worry...As Archana said...Its worth waiting!!!

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2006, Blogger Tushar said...

That's cute!
Reminded me of Yash Chopra movies though...Kajol dancing in the rain in DDLJ; singing 'mere khwabo me jo aaye' and Madhuri saying 'Someone somewhere is made for you!'in Dil To Pagal Hai:)

 
At Monday, August 14, 2006, Blogger Nayana Kulkarni-Dongare said...

"Cant it be just like…two people meet and everything’s just fine!"

WOW. Seriously. This line is really touching for me.

Many time we think that everything is fine, but after sometime we realise nothing is fine.

Its like "Mrugajal" in marathi.
We try to catch a lot but finally we find, there was nothing to catch.

 
At Tuesday, November 07, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

best

 
At Tuesday, November 07, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

best

 
At Tuesday, November 07, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

berst

 
At Tuesday, November 07, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

best

 

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